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The Real Reason Some Offers Don’t Land
Selling a product isn’t just about the product—it’s about the positioning. Even a strong offer can fail if customers don’t understand the transformation it provides. People buy outcomes, not features. They invest in results, not vague promises.
A common pitfall for entrepreneurs is building a service or product around what they think is valuable, instead of starting with the customer’s pain point. Without clearly defining what your product does and for whom, marketing becomes guesswork. Strong positioning helps businesses stand out, even in saturated markets. It clarifies the value proposition, attracts the right audience, and makes the path to purchase feel effortless.
Business Spotlight: Hollaway Esthetics – Messaging That Sells Through Mission
Savannah Hollaway, owner of Hollaway Esthetics in Montgomery City, Missouri, understands how to create messaging that connects. Her current campaign, Glow for a Cause, perfectly illustrates how mission-driven marketing builds trust, boosts visibility, and drives conversions.
Rather than just promoting services, Savannah communicates a reason for the offer. She’s offering Circadia Tropical Refresher At-Home Facial Kits for $50—and 100% of the proceeds go toward providing free facials to individuals undergoing cancer treatment.
Her message is clear: self-care isn’t selfish—it’s a way to spread care even further.
Glow for a Cause: What’s Included
Lipid Cleanser (0.5 oz)
Caviar Lime & Passionfruit Enzyme Mask (1 oz)
Marshmallow Whip Hydrating Mask (1 oz)
Vitamin C Reversal Serum (3 mL)
Post Peel Balm (0.5 oz)
Circadia-branded Facial Brush & Headband
Step-by-step instructions for a spa-quality experience at home
Pre-orders are open through July 15. Orders can be picked up in-person or arranged via local meet-up. Payment is accepted via cash, check, or Venmo.
What makes this campaign such a powerful example of great messaging? Savannah aligns her offer with her values. She highlights the emotional outcome: relaxation, beauty, and contribution. Every detail—from kit contents to payment method—is easy to access and infused with purpose. That’s messaging that sells because it matters.
Facts & Statistics
According to HubSpot (2023), 64% of consumers say shared values and messaging clarity are key factors in their buying decisions. Businesses with a well-defined brand message see 23% higher conversion rates (HubSpot, 2023). Further, 81% of consumers say they need to trust the brand to buy from them (Edelman, 2022).
Offer Clarity Worksheet
Try this worksheet to clarify your own messaging. You can use it before launching a product, writing a social media caption, or updating your website.
Offer Clarity Worksheet
What is your product or service?
What specific problem does it solve?
Who is your ideal customer?
What measurable result can they expect?
What makes your offer unique?
What emotional payoff does your customer receive?
Example for Hollaway Esthetics:
Product: Circadia Tropical Refresher Facial Kits
Problem Solved: Lack of access to professional skincare/self-care
Ideal Client: Skincare-conscious individuals looking for purpose-driven purchases
Result: A spa-like facial at home while supporting a meaningful cause
Unique Edge: 100% proceeds go toward free oncology facials
Emotional Outcome: Restored confidence, community connection, and glowing skin
Call to Action
Use Savannah’s campaign as inspiration to look at your own marketing message. Are you offering more than a product? Are you giving people a way to connect with their values? When messaging is rooted in clarity and purpose, it doesn’t just sell—it spreads.
References
Edelman. (2022). 2022 Edelman Trust Barometer. https://www.edelman.com/trust/2022-trust-barometer
HubSpot. (2023). The State of Marketing 2023: Trends and Data. https://www.hubspot.com/state-of-marketing